Autonomy
A familiar voice
''Hello stranger''
eyes reflected
in the mirror
Comments
<Deleted User> (7212)
Tue 2nd Nov 2010 22:43
A1++++
top stuff, janet... the positive comments wrote previously sum up the way i feel about this... the style i think really suits you (i do write short short stuff but get bored doing it but it defo suits you really well).. Keep it up - the break possibly has really done you good! xx
top stuff, janet... the positive comments wrote previously sum up the way i feel about this... the style i think really suits you (i do write short short stuff but get bored doing it but it defo suits you really well).. Keep it up - the break possibly has really done you good! xx
Nice one Janet. You say a lot with a little. I wouldn't be without autonomy ever again - could happily do without mirrors sometimes though. :) xx
I like the simplicity of this and yet it says such a lot. Great title too.
Dave
<Deleted User> (6895)
Mon 1st Nov 2010 15:54
very thought provoking Janet-perhaps apostrophe after 'stranger!-regards-Stef-xx
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Chris Dawson
Fri 5th Nov 2010 10:25
Can identify with this Janet ... where did we go?
Cx