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Nicolas

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I’ve admired your images on the internet,
seen your profile, followed your career.  With interest
a speculative e-mail I delivered fondly,
not too formal, not too long, crafted to be friendly.
You responded, a brief but kind request
For further information, and you sent your best
regards for my assistance, and then wished me well.
I can imagine you my virile French gazelle
Ex bike rider, herd member turned shepherd,
And imagine how you’d be in your manly hide,
legs bent lazily along linen bed sheets
long lean back curving cleanly, best of athletes.
I want your sprawling, careless relaxed body,
those sweetly muscled arms folded round me,
foreign lips murmuring sweet rien and l'amour
honey seeping from every tingling pore.
And I speculate over my next missive,
striving to keep our correspondence active
for the sake of furthering future fantasy,
nothing flirtatious and nothing saucy,
enough to savour this as possibility,
whilst retaining distance from reality.
 

◄ Self indulgence

Song of triumph ►

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alisonsmiles68@gmail.com

Thu 25th Nov 2010 18:36

Maybe Cotton would be more me!

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 25th Nov 2010 18:19

No, linen sheets are fine! Now satin, that would be cliche! I really enjoyed this poem, esp for it's poignant side.

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Thu 25th Nov 2010 15:40

lol Alison you might have turned me with this. I love the poem. maybe "linen sheets" is a bit cliches though.

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Ray Miller

Thu 25th Nov 2010 11:20

No idea who or what Nicolas is but I like the poem, it strikes a nice tone, the ending is quite poignant, I suppose. You've made some typing error, I presume, in line 2.

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winston plowes

Thu 25th Nov 2010 00:26

These young mens bodies are formed around their machines. What a great glimpse of the strange human moulded in this way. Despite all the drugs and stories they are the ultimate athletes, nowhere to hide. You overlay a spicy relationship to this in your poem. Magnificent! Win x

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