Comes and Goes a Day
Comes and Goes a Day
The rim of a hat tilts silently towards me
While a kai-bosh batters my thoughts,
And my head banging wall is dented so violently
And tickles of torture trickle streams of blood;
Fatigue holding tight like a noose from
A snakes ardent enquiry,
And there’s the life-form sat in a pan.
Emotion discharges the creation,
But I’m holding on, holding on,
Holding on as best as can but it’s no use!
And this love for my wife is ashen and grey
As hurt;
We’re sitting in silence for an unborn memory,-
A child so precious of time,
And I’m clinging on
Clinging on
Clinging on.
A day comes and goes,
And this motivational loss grieves like a bastard,
Heaves all my weakness
And then there’s your love,
And my tears remain private and sorrow;
Unpacks a suitcase of wishes
For an extended stay,
And this heart,
Creaks like an old ram-shackled hut,
While strain seeks to implode on our being.
Michael J Waite – 25th November 2010. 0211hrs.
Dave Bradley
Fri 26th Nov 2010 22:49
Hi MikeDon't worry if you don't get too many comments on this. I'm sure lots of people will read it - it's such a powerful poem - and appreciate its force and emotion, but simply won't know what to say to you. Anyone who, like me, hasn't been through it, tends to have a feeling they should keep their mouth shut because they don't know - can't know in fact.
Apologies this got multi-posted initially - no idea how - never happened before
Sorry if these few words don't hit the spot, but loads of sympathy to you and your wife.