unwanted wants
to get what one wants
and find one does not want it.
Life's Chinese whispers
Comments
<Deleted User> (7212)
Sat 11th Dec 2010 20:14
great Dave - very well observed - this has happened to me on more than one occasion :)
i actually read the original line 'as careless whisper' by accident, dave - lol
but good one m8.. enjoyed it a lot
Philipos
Thu 9th Dec 2010 23:07
Hi Dave - how true the last line - very cleverly phrased
The usual Dave....quietly brilliant.
Thank you.
Jxxx
Hello Dave
Haikus don't generally do much for me.
This was an exception; so much so that I'd read it twice before I realised it was one.
Nice work.
<Deleted User> (6315)
Thu 9th Dec 2010 19:41
hello Dave..what a profound haiku..i realy enjoyed that last line it made me think yup!..
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<Deleted User> (7212)
Sat 11th Dec 2010 20:15
BTW - I LOVE E.Dowd's comment further down - hilarious !