Picnic
At a small waterfall in Aberedw
ashes are scattered and flowers thrown
through the shimmer and foamy torrent.
Much of her sinks and stains the bottom;
blooms uncaptured by the current
meander in tedious circles,
outliving at last our patience.
I'd imagined a floral flotilla
serenely sailing to the distance,
and the letter that you wrote
floating closely in its slipstream.
In death as in life she lingered:
loth to say goodbye, you considered;
or there is no place to go, I differed,
as pink and purple petals
entwined into a garland.
Only the presence of an absence;
nothing but a disappointing
end to the picnic.
Laura Taylor
Tue 18th Jan 2011 13:32
This has some beautiful sounds in it Ray...
'through the shimmer and foamy torrent.
Much of her sinks and stains the bottom',
'I'd imagined a floral flotilla
serenely sailing to the distance...
floating closely in its slipstream'
Love the pink and purple petals too
Had to check the spelling on loth as I've always spelled it loathe. Whaddaya know?