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The Red Lady of Paviland

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The Red Lady was, in fact, a male in his 20s.

The sea was, of course, miles away 30,000 years ago.

One supposition is that "she" died hunting the mammoth, some of whose bones were ritualistically laid at "her" side.

 

Lay me in the sacred cavern

By the softly surfing sea

Let the dank and distant whisper

Ease the fire that burns in me.

Tell the Beast I bear no malice

She and I are of one flesh

Mine to feed the gulls and shore crabs

Hers to feed my bretheren.

Can you hear the Old Folk calling?

From the shadows of the cave?

In the surf that swells the sea-shore?

In the crying of the terns?

Predator and prey together;

I killed her as she killed me;

Let me lie beside the Beast bones

That our spirits may be one

◄ 6/4 Against

Happy Birthday, Jill ►

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<Deleted User> (8943)

Sun 13th Feb 2011 09:40

Hey John, with regards rhymes, if you think about it, at that period of time language was much simpler so perhaps it's right that you didn't use rhymes ;) x

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Ann Foxglove

Sat 12th Feb 2011 16:39

I like this a lot. When I studied archaeology I did my disertation on the Red Lady. I used the picture you've got here, and I went to the museum in Oxford and was able to draw some of "her" accoutrements, which included a pendant made from a deformed growth from a mammoth tusk. Brought back memories. I always meant to go and see her cave, but never did. Maybe one day!

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 12th Feb 2011 16:23

John, this is super. The subject development is totally engaging. I really like the chanting, hymn-like motion of the poem. The opening four lines have a Longfellow feel, like 'Hiawatha'.

<Deleted User> (8943)

Sat 12th Feb 2011 08:52

I love the sound of the sea as it comes through into the cave, can smell the mustiness too - great, I do so love being transported - thanks John x

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Dave Bradley

Sat 12th Feb 2011 07:05

Very evocative and really really interesting. Any more where this came from?

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Ray Miller

Fri 11th Feb 2011 18:48

Never thought I'd see John Coopey non-rhyming. This is good, John, very nice indeed.

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