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Tiny Talk

This morning I heard a very loud bird

   Chirrup!  Chee!  Chee! 

   at half-past three.

 

I wanted to sleep but just couldn't keep

   out the noise

   of that cheer-i-o voice.

 

Then I had to admit (in spite of my snit)

   that the damn perky bird

   would have the last word.

 

So I settled my ire and began to admire

   such insistance to share

   this twittering flair.

 

I pulled up the blind and, of course, couldn't find

   feathers so wee

   in the thick holly tree.

 

I blew out a kiss which I know didn't miss

   and jumped back in bed

   with a sock on my head.

 

It WAS, after all,

       only three-thirty

                ........... and FROSTY!

 

 

 

 

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Fkx

Mon 28th Mar 2011 07:45

Thank you for reminding us of the beauty and vibrance 'of tiny talk.'

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David Cooke

Sun 27th Mar 2011 16:31

Very perky, Cynthia! LIke the playful use of rhyme. Clever, too, of Greg to remind us all of Hardy's great poem!

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Mon 14th Mar 2011 10:54

You have lots of admirers, the sock on the head is very funny.

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melanie coady

Wed 9th Mar 2011 11:31

love it hun..really cheery x

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Laura Taylor

Mon 7th Mar 2011 13:46

Snit - great word :) Love the sock on the head too - reminds me of Wee Willie Winkie type of writing.

I love this Cynthia - the rhyming scheme is childlike and occasionally onomatopoeiac . I too get woken up by birds chirping at ungodly hours - when the sun isn't even up.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 7th Mar 2011 10:21

Thanks, All. Would you believe I was reading Chaucer's 'Prologue' (modern English) just yesterday, and found the same idea within the first twenty lines! I can't wait to dip into the Middle English again to see the original words, but - got to find my copy first.

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John Coopey

Sun 6th Mar 2011 19:30

Bird singing through the night?
Very probably a robin - they do.
Birds have only got 3 songs though -
"Cripes! I'm outta here" (alarm)
"O sole mio" (courtship)
"You're gonna get your f*king head kicked in" (territory).

Philipos

Sun 6th Mar 2011 18:09

Might have been a night jar but that's only a stab in the dark - liked this and learned a new word 'snit' - great thoughts come in the quiet hours for me too xx

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Sun 6th Mar 2011 13:46

we don't get many birds singing at night - I'd have suggested maybe a nightingale - but I don't think it's the right time of year ?

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Sun 6th Mar 2011 12:43

very chirpy poem Cynthia :-)

my cat would have a field day in that holly tree.
I felt the poem came to an end a bit abruptly but love the imagery with the jumping back into bed.x

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Isobel

Sun 6th Mar 2011 11:49

A very cheerful chirpy poem Cynthia - perfect for this time of year. The sun is streaming through my clean windows and it's sounding good! xx

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Dave Bradley

Sun 6th Mar 2011 00:00

Bird song at night is so evocative. And thank you for the reminder to find something to appreciate, if possible, in what is initially irritating.

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Julian (Admin)

Sat 5th Mar 2011 20:11

So, we are now on Twitter.
Delightful, Cynthia, even with a sock on your head!

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Greg Freeman

Sat 5th Mar 2011 18:48

Very cheery, Cynthia. Reminds me a bit of that Thomas Hardy poem, The Darkling Thrush.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 5th Mar 2011 17:10

I thought it time to 'lighten up' a bit, in the interests of balanced sanity.

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