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His Works

The plague raged from the west to east

where once we'd flattered us sound and safe,

and those great gulfs, the burial pits,

were its footsteps, tokens of advancement.

The prints groaned huge and heavier

come the closeness and height of summer;

feeding by dark, the dead carts tumbling

their cargo to a cold promiscuity.

In scarcely a fortnight a thousand corpses

sated the cavities, blanketed by those

who, appraised of near demise,

or prey to some vertiginous fugue

simply lay or threw themselves on the heaps

seeking swift expiry. Others made stupid

by insupportable grief, melancholic weight

causing the head to sink in degrees

until barely seen above shoulders.

And the babes poisoned at suck

on the plague-spotted breasts;

incessant roars and lamentations;

the naked raving plunge to water.

 

From this we fled; fled north so's to keep

the sun at our backs and wind in our face;

went in scout of some space to wait out

the distemper, in faith it would falter

come chill of December or for want

of flesh to assuage its hunger.

Each village obliged us to parley

from a distance, always at a distance,

the townsfolk attempting to forbid

our passage for fear of infection -

have us wander starving hither to thither.

As availing to request a soul to stand fast

in a house incandescent with fire.

For the stronger enemy lay behind,

its pestilent breath at our necks

compelled us to subterfuge,

bluff, smoke and musketry,

as animals puff up their size in jeopardy.

At length we forged a way out to the forest,

pitched camp and endured until frost and blizzard

had purged the contagious footholds.

 

When the plague had abated

they all sang God's praises

and soon forgot His Works.

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Jon

Thu 10th Mar 2011 07:40

A very accomplished one,this Ray! Love the language,"Others made stupid by insupportable grief,melancholic weight causing the head to sink in degrees until barely seen above shoulders".
Thanks also for your advice on my tenses.You were right!

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Ray Miller

Tue 8th Mar 2011 20:25

Thanks Laura and Banksy. No, I don't remember that TV programme and no I don't have a big boomy voice. I've a fairly weak Brummie twang until I get on stage when it becomes a much stronger and infinitely more annoying Brummie accent. I don't know why.

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Tue 8th Mar 2011 18:21

Marvellous Ray !
do you remember the roses of eyam in the 70's ? - a TV play about the plague ? - both chilling & hilarious in turn. B

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Laura Taylor

Tue 8th Mar 2011 14:41

Very different indeed Ray - almost mythical. Can hear this being read aloud by a big boomy-voiced bloke! Do you have a big boomy voice?

I like it, a lot. Am a sucker for a good story.

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Ray Miller

Tue 8th Mar 2011 08:04

Thanks, Steve, Greg, Ann.I like to throw something out like this once in a while, never very popular but that's not the point. It's based on Journal of a Plague Year by Daniel Defoe, which I think is a fine book.Giving things a go, yes, we may not get very high, but look at the width!

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Ann Foxglove

Tue 8th Mar 2011 07:12

So good to read a poem about something so unexpected and different! I wonder why this subject popped into your head? "bluff, smoke and musketry" is a great line.

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Greg Freeman

Tue 8th Mar 2011 06:45

This really tells a story and casts a chill, with well-chosen language reflecting the times: "went in scout of some space to wait out / the distemper, in faith it would falter / come chill of December or for want / of flesh to assuage its hunger." The law of the jungle when the plague is at its height; the quick forgetfulness when it has abated. The music and rhythm of this poem reminds us of the ravages wrought by plague, and the grip of religion over the populace for so many centuries.

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