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Spring is Coming

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Spring is coming

And faces were pressed

Flat against the windows.

 

Spring is coming

Breathless and touching

From a distance.

 

Spring is coming

Like a child

Which is deep inside.

 

Spring is coming

Like a long lost love

As the sun sneaks

Past the windowsill

In the morning.

 

And over the shoulders

Of your sleeping beauty

Eyelids.

 

 

Spring

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Andy N

Wed 6th Apr 2011 08:12

glad you liked 'Spring is Coming', Dave.. thanks for commenting

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Tue 29th Mar 2011 01:13

Nice!!

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Andy N

Mon 28th Mar 2011 21:32

thanks everybody for the comments - it was a bit of fun this piece in-between more meatier material but great fun reflecting spring in all of it's beauty.

let's hope it a good un this year! A

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Thu 17th Mar 2011 13:18

yes Spring is well and truly on its way. Lovely feeling to this Andy :-)

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Cate Greenlees

Wed 16th Mar 2011 13:45

The daffodils are all out.... thats the first sign of spring for me. A nice hopeful feel to it this one Andy.
cATE XX

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melanie coady

Tue 15th Mar 2011 09:30

beautiful xx

Philipos

Mon 14th Mar 2011 18:10

Nice feel to this Andy with its brevity of language and the piccy with a lovely lady sets a soothing tone

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Greg Freeman

Mon 14th Mar 2011 10:08

I like this, Andy. I could feel the spring coming on Saturday. Then woke up to a frost this morning!

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