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Perfect Place

I don’t want to wake you
When you’re sleeping so quiet
on my shoulder.

I don’t want to brush your
Hair back down from your face
or turn down the stereo.

I don’t want to sing in
the rain nor do I want
to sail away into the sunset.

I don’t want to close the curtains
and shut out the moon
Shining down on us
Like we are in the spotlight
of some imaginary film.

I want to spend
this moment
Alone in thought.

I want to listen
to the cars parking
in the distance.

I want to listen
to the wind
Brush against the tree
Almost like
it was somebody
Gently snoozing.

But most of all,
I don’t want to wake you
When you’re sleeping so quiet
on my shoulder.

 

 

 

(NB. - A repost but since it is nearly Valentines day,I thought why not - lol)

love poem

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winston plowes

Mon 21st Feb 2011 22:58

Nice Andy... similar to the curtains (your last blog) liked also. Win x

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Andy N

Sun 20th Feb 2011 16:45

thanks to all who commented.. one of my fav pieces this one and something i do return to certainly every now and then... x

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Francine

Wed 16th Feb 2011 16:20

I like the way you create a sense of just being in the moment and enjoying it... : )

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Dave Bradley

Wed 16th Feb 2011 12:47

I agree with the others - this is lovely, Andy.

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Gus Jonsson

Wed 16th Feb 2011 12:04

Your poetry has come on leaps and bounds over the last year or so... IMHO,... another quiet gentle , lulling piece ...wheras I'd just go through her handbag and look up her skirt ...

Great poem Andy


Gus

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 14th Feb 2011 12:23

This is completely charming, lyrical in thought and expression, and very loving. I think it is one of your best which I intend to read many times. The opening and closing stanzas are great crafting.

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Isobel

Sun 13th Feb 2011 16:41

I thought it sounded familiar. I was beginning to think that your girlfriend must do a lot of sleeping... LOL. This is sweet and perfect for the time of year. x

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Sun 13th Feb 2011 14:21

aww... that's really sweet. Lovely images ;-)

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