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find the bastion

I don’t know where to put my love.
I tried to express it in a box
but its tender ‘lil fingers
lifted the lid up
and it ran off for a while
and I wondered about the room
within which it cowered
once finally settled
as cold as mine?
such a gentle creature
but with fuse for a tail
exploding in inappropriate places
never a right time
nor never death for love
the boundary crossing god
is bold
the night and the princess
love the fairytales told
simply because they are there
so let
the brave leave the doors open
for love slips back in
after such outburst
from a night on the town.
Forgiveness affords and
sings about the glitteratic journeys
all the neon clouds
asphalt and granite kerbs
gutters paper fold
and was it all worth the row?
its cold between the slotted grates.
foul beneath streets.
so come back
cast iron
come back
I’m waiting on my side
with knees known as fetal
in a warm bed
heck, I’m so predictable!
Pining for those gentle eyes
leaving a gap for which you
to find the bastion
in familiarity, my arms.

◄ a slight spiritual tugging

upon the missing ►

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Francine

Fri 22nd May 2009 21:16

Awww... c'est triste.

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clarissa mckone

Tue 15th Jul 2008 06:21

Hi Pete,
Very nice poem, I agree with the others. So many gutters and kerbs to hold hands with. The pavement always forgiving, except to females in pumps.Those neon cloud lips to chase after and kiss, the drunken eyes and constant crys, caused by problems in the minds eyes. Yep I like this poem,made me feel like I was on dope, and Im never on dope, good to have a contact high from your words at times!

<Deleted User> (5646)

Mon 14th Jul 2008 14:56

Aw Pete, you must be the only man i know who can romanticize the pavement and gutters of a street. with asphalt and granite kerbs to match.
This is soooo loveleee.!
Janet.xx

<Deleted User> (5164)

Mon 14th Jul 2008 01:53

you have a lovely way with words
i really enjoyed reading this poem

sez x

p.s
thanx for the comment x

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