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Island

After many a summer time must have a stop:

an emptied stage and canopy hung starless.

Aldous Huxley's dying, Kennedy's been shot

and all the western world is watching Dallas.

 

He tells his wife to tip the boy some dollars

for the oxygen tanks; though his days are spent,

there's an infinite succession of tomorrows

Huxley is attempting to circumvent.

 

A worn out stoic, the literary gent,

something of a saint or bodhisattva

undertaking a brave new experiment

to illuminate the world he'll find hereafter.

 

The boundless nature of ego-ambition

inhibits the religious experience:

Huxley adopted a yogic position,

counterpoint to this tear-wet transience.

 

Idolaters venerate the sacred ground

of dubious Golden Ages and Utopias;

only outside of history is goodness found 

and mankind is a martyr to myopia.

 

The western world murders a scarecrow saviour

and confabulates a Cuban connection;

a fine day to sneak oneself beneath the radar

and disappear through the doors of perception.

 

Fortified by pain relief and LSD

in the pleasure dome he floats on the waves.

There's no heaven or hell, only eternity,

yet perhaps there is an entity that saves?

 

Not Jesus or Mohammed, Krishna, Buddha,

not these nightmares and assassinations,

not these templed schemes for a perfect future

but this emptiness enhanced by medication.....

 

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Dave Carr

Tue 10th May 2011 21:54

I always enjoy reading your poems. Just catching up. I like the subtle references here and I too have looked up info on Huxley. I see that Island was the title of his last novel. Very clever stuff.

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Ray Miller

Sun 17th Apr 2011 11:05

Thanks, Steve. Quality with a cockney accent is a lovely phrase.

Thanks, Chris. Nothing to do with Brian Cox, I'm afraid. Time Must Have A Stop is a quote from Shakespeare and also a title of a Huxley novel, as is Brave New World (from The Tempest, I believe). A canopy hung starless sounds Shakespearean, but I made it up myself -I think!Shakespeare had a way of encapsulating whole philosophies in a few words

But thought's the slave of life, and life time's fool;
And time, that takes survey of all the world,
Must have a stop.

Soma was the name of the drug in Brave New World. Huxley took LSD on his deathbed in order to better negotiate an afterlife of whose existence he wasn't quite convinced.Covering all the bases, I suppose.
As for the ending, it's as vague as Huxley's faith, perhaps. He embraced Buddhism to a certain extent in his later life and there's points at which Buddhist philosophy and modern science weld harmoniously.

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Chris Co

Sat 16th Apr 2011 15:38

Excellent poem Ray.

Lots of great lines and ideas.

I am surprised nobody has mentioned prof Brian Cox and the nature of the speed of light. At least I took this as an allusion for;

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an emptied stage and canopy hung starless
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And the stars in the cosmos in time disapearing from the night sky and leaving humanity with a certain sense of lonliness (if we are still here at all that is).

A canopy hung starless is a great way of putting it.

Time must have a stop- I took to be the nature of space/time and their link and the fact that eventually time itself must end.

I take it brave new experiment is a reference to Huxley's Brave New World?

Though I must say the general Huxley reference went slightly over my head. I have only read Brave New World and that was a long time ago so?

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and mankind is a martyr to myopia
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A triad of head-rhyme/aliteration that works very well...more importantly the content. Mankind is a martyr to myopia- I would agree with that, though I recognise that could be my own short-sightedness. It's a great/memorable line.

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Fortified by pain relief and LSD
in the pleasure dome he floats on the waves
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If I recall their was a drug they took in Brave New World- soma or something like that. I vaguely recall the idea of happiness- keeping people happy. I guess this LSD could be a reference to that. The waves could be a reference to background static/cosmic background radiation that was emited from the big bang or thought of as a possible allusion to this. Isn't it the case that this will eventually dissipate/no longer be measurable in the distant future?

What makes me think the above could be right is this further reference;

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There's no heaven or hell, only eternity,
yet perhaps there is an entity that saves?
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Eternity or at least a seeming perception of it was again something Cox covered? When we get to a certain point in time, it will if the theory he detailed is correct, reach a point where planets and stars and pretty much everything else- is no more. God will no longer exist at that point from the atheist position- because humans will not exist- so no heaven or hell.

Will eternity save? I am not sure how and would be interested on your thoughts here.

Really liked 'templed schemes'.

Again would be interested in any enlightenment as to interpreting the end of the poem.

Anyway in a world where far too much is dumbed-down, it is good to read something packed with concepts, allusions and...thought!

My Best

Chris

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Ray Miller

Fri 15th Apr 2011 19:39

Thanks, Greg, Philipos. Huxley died the day Kennedy was assassinated. Perhaps the poem's title should be 22/11/1963? After Many A Summer is the title of one of Huxley's novels.

Philipos

Fri 15th Apr 2011 15:46

Hi Ray - liked especially 'mankind is a martyr to myopia' how very true - thought 'many a summer time' might have been slightly better if expressed rather as a plural but that's me - overall a poem to stretch the mind with talk of saints and bodhisattvas and with just a hint of someone with a theosophical background - well done

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Greg Freeman

Fri 15th Apr 2011 08:55

Liked the juxtaposition of Kennedy and Huxley, Ray, and Huxley, overlooked at the end of his life, foreshadowing the hippie 'revolution' and psychedelia.

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