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THE ALL-PURPOSE STARS

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Last month's poem of the month writer, Hannah Kate, has chosen this month's poem.

 
Hannah says, "I really enjoy Steve's work, particularly his cut-and-paste technique. This poem says nothing beautiful - but it is a moving and beautiful thing. It threads together a series of phrases we've all read a thousand times before, but somehow creates something incredibly poetic and new. Or rather, it makes us create it. I know what I think it means..."

Find out more about Steven and his work at http://www.writeoutloud.net/poets/stevenwaling

THE ALL-PURPOSE STARS

Someone’s behaviour is bothering
a significant other Try not to rescue
everyone today It’s a day for keeping
You might be in a silly mood but

it feels like you’re stuck in quicksand.
A great day for haircuts kicking arse
if you’re feeling stuck with some ache
you need to tiptoe like a fairy round

Someone in your life has a bee in their bonnet
where what’s not out in the open
is the tendency to blurt strange truths
at the wrong moments The way through

is to think about the future beyond

Something hidden will pop out Careful.

◄ Festival of Bathing Beauties, Lincolnshire

Martin Daws at DGPS ►

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Malpoet

Thu 30th Oct 2008 16:36

I have been reading Steven's work since I first saw a comment of his which irritated me. I cannot make much sense of any of it. This collection of clichés jumbled together with weird punctuation, spacing and capitalisation says nothing to me at all. Is it a case of the Emperor's clothes or an empty vessel shouting loudly. I don't know. Maybe the admirers of the work would enlighten me.

<Deleted User> (5575)

Mon 27th Oct 2008 21:04

This is a lovely poem, choppy and catchy, swollen with imagery; I particulary like the powerful closing line.

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Julian (Admin)

Mon 20th Oct 2008 16:31

Love it Steve. Highly original, and yet...

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Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

Sat 18th Oct 2008 21:29

Yes, a poem of cliches, carried off well...

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Andy Sewina aka Danny Wise

Wed 15th Oct 2008 11:04

Brilliant as ever Steve, brilliant!

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