THE ALL-PURPOSE STARS
Last month's poem of the month writer, Hannah Kate, has chosen this month's poem.
Find out more about Steven and his work at http://www.writeoutloud.net/poets/stevenwaling
THE ALL-PURPOSE STARS
Someone’s behaviour is bothering
a significant other Try not to rescue
everyone today It’s a day for keeping
You might be in a silly mood but
it feels like you’re stuck in quicksand.
A great day for haircuts kicking arse
if you’re feeling stuck with some ache
you need to tiptoe like a fairy round
Someone in your life has a bee in their bonnet
where what’s not out in the open
is the tendency to blurt strange truths
at the wrong moments The way through
is to think about the future beyond
Something hidden will pop out Careful.
Malpoet
Thu 30th Oct 2008 16:36
I have been reading Steven's work since I first saw a comment of his which irritated me. I cannot make much sense of any of it. This collection of clichés jumbled together with weird punctuation, spacing and capitalisation says nothing to me at all. Is it a case of the Emperor's clothes or an empty vessel shouting loudly. I don't know. Maybe the admirers of the work would enlighten me.