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exit route to nowhere

woodworms came calling,
left a cruel mark on me.
thoughts tumble fast now
through holes i don't see.
woodpeckers woodpeckers
you're just the same,
picking and pecking
at all but my name

chase the bunny down
the tunnel,
and a dead end you will find,
a labyrinth in reflection
of my gnarled and rotten mind.

woodworms, oh, woodworms
each hole is a door
you're boring is futile
i'm bothered no more.
woodpeckers, woodpeckers
you're picking is done,
i'm at the last door and
soon, i'll be gone

into the cavern of nothing
behind, and out to the
wilderness, to where i 'll unwind.

helicopters fall from a maple tree
there in the middle, smiling, is me.

◄ Time-riding

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Francine

Sat 23rd Apr 2011 21:30

Fabulous expressions of overwhelming thoughts, chaos, and a longing to escape...

Love the ending:

'i'm at the last door and
soon, i'll be gone

into the cavern of nothing
behind, and out to the
wilderness, to where i 'll unwind.

helicopters fall from a maple tree
there in the middle, smiling, is me.'

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Isobel

Sat 23rd Apr 2011 11:16

I think that would be 'your' rather than 'you're' in the boring line - if I'm reading it correctly.

Would agree with Lynn and Steve - you are a talented poet. I like the surreal style you have used - it does feel very Alice down the rabbit hole. The images of the woodpecker, the holes - the chipping away of our thoughts and minds.

I hope you find your maple tree. x

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Lynn Dye

Sat 23rd Apr 2011 00:47

I like this, Kath, well written.

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