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Pompeii

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Thank you for dying

so dramatically and suddenly.

Our archaeologists and tourists

appreciate it, appreciate

your frescoes and fountains,

brothels and bakeries,

your eerie, grey corpses.

Even Pink Floyd are grateful.

 

Your emperor was no help.

If here, he too

would be a doom-faced corpse

as you are now.

Corpse-town Pompeii,

Vulcan's plaything.

Violence on the violent,

tombs entombed,

sky raining horror, air molten

pumice-pummeled bodies burning,

flaming togas, engulfed erotica.

No longer slave and master, companions

in twisted, grey, gasping death.

 

Running futile, streets lethal

Hiding futile, cellars lethal

Money futile, shops lethal

Struggling futile, air lethal

Swimming futile, harbour lethal

Praying futile, temples lethal.

No escape, no hope, no exit.

Here you die, she dies, he dies,

we all die.

The whole town dies,

only ash, ash, cinders and more ash.

 

You had warnings,

knew the hovering threat,

the imminent eruption.

You refused to believe, think, move, know.

 

I know

the Vesuvius in my life

and the settled town below it.

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Comments

Philipos

Sat 23rd Apr 2011 18:46

We need reminding of such things from time to time and this poem certainly helps us to do just that - so many images to to make us shudder at the cruelty of it all - well done David

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Isobel

Sat 23rd Apr 2011 11:09

Like Greg, I really love the last 3 lines. That takes the poem to another dimension and is great way to end it. The rest wasn't quite poetic enough for me - but little is nowadays - I'm in a negative frame of mind which is why I'm incapable of finishing anything myself LOL

Pompeii/Herculanium - fascinating places where real lives were lived out. xx

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Greg Freeman

Sat 23rd Apr 2011 10:53

This is an excellent poem, Dave, expressing our continuing, horrified fascination with Pompeii. But the final three lines are best of all

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