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Fruits of the Narrow Seam

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Close the coalhouse door, lad

There's bones inside

(Alex Glasgow)

 

Fruits of the Narrow Seam

frozen tears

on a mossy stone

beneath a sundial

which has swept out

one hundred and thirty seven

years' worth of days

since they were

carved

at Christmastide


When time stopped


and a mother wept

while in ignorance and velvet comfort

the coal-owners opened gifts

bought with her young men’s blood


and the shadow moved again

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 21st May 2011 22:12

John, this is really good, a deep and passionate portrayal with a few inspired words. The title is superb. I look forward to more of your work.

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John Embley

Wed 18th May 2011 19:20

Yes -- it was prompted by a tiny little gravestone I spotted in the local churchyard, two brothers killed within weeks of each other just before Christmas -- well overgrown, and neglected.
Thanks for the kind comment -- my first!

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chris yates

Tue 17th May 2011 12:23

really like this poem about the hardships of the miners and their familys and the injustice of those times being a wiganer growing up in a town where pits were the livelihood of the ordinary man and women,not forgetting the pit brow lasses well written ...Chris :-) x

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