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Vapour Trail

VAPOUR TRAIL

 

Last night,

Just at the onset of the dark,

When the slow withdrawal of the light

Had left the whole world stark,

And all around was emptiness and height,

As I sat – listening to the vastness – bent,

                                                   She went.

◄ The Infinite Sadness of Time Passing

An uncouth case of timing ►

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Ray Miller

Sun 17th Jul 2011 23:00

emptiness and height - that's really very nice.

<Deleted User> (6895)

Sun 17th Jul 2011 20:02

worthy of a comment for such a lovely smile if nothing else Harry-very sad sentiment-if true I,m very sorry.Stef.

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 17th Jul 2011 11:58

Your vapour trail has disappeared Harry!

Later . . . . ah, it has appeard! A rather dramatic ending here. Makes it sound quite funny but I don't know if it's meant to.

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