Reserve
It fills the room in which we dine
at tables doomed for eight or nine;
the champagne glasses deftly clinked,
though champagne isn't what we drink.
The chicken textured rubber duck
and vegetables are overcooked;
rain dribbles down the window-panes,
the walls exhibit aged stains.
The waitress frowns, absorbed, remote;
you make a sound, you clear your throat......
..........then whisper something indistinct:
our stiltedness makes others wince.
Is it the presence of an absence
or the absence of a presence?
This subject that you fail to mention,
always trailing off mid-sentence.
The portraits yawn, the music plinks,
a napkin's drawn to bloodless lips.
So many seats remain unfilled:
it isn't quite as it was billed.
It never is and seldom was,
we visit every year because
we once were smitten in this fog,
and bitten now seek hair of dog.
Ray Miller
Tue 23rd Aug 2011 17:19
Thanks all.
Ann- it's not autobiographical, thank goodness.Yes, I'm not wholly convinced by those lines. They maybe belong in another poem.
Philipos - I like Betjeman, though it's not at all fashionable to say that, is it?
John - I have, John, and I know what you mean.
Francine. What the last line tries to convey are those mostly futile efforts to recapture something long dead by returning to "where it all began". The more I think about it the less it works! Ha!
Dave - "closes with a snap" - is that a pun?