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Tipping Point

Until the thaw begins, tobogganing's

the white-knuckle ride par excellence;

the whoosh of the wind

and the unbroken bend

to swerve undisturbed dog excrement.

 

In this rarefied air the uncritical ear

is unable to rumble the avalanche;

the snow-blinded eye

doesn't see what may lie

underfoot or over the precipice.

 

As we hurtle in sight of the tipping point

and slalom ephemeral effigies,

reconsider that shit

and the size of those prints -

that's a polar bear seeking new premises.

 

◄ pinhead

Leprosy ►

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Ray Miller

Tue 13th Sep 2011 19:55

Thanks, Isobel.I don't know how I think them up. If I did I might stop. It's kind of automatic....but you still have to be there.

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Isobel

Mon 12th Sep 2011 20:40

Nice humour Ray. A very original poem - how do you think them up? Though I can't quite feel the same about polar bears since that last mauling!

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