Tipping Point
Until the thaw begins, tobogganing's
the white-knuckle ride par excellence;
the whoosh of the wind
and the unbroken bend
to swerve undisturbed dog excrement.
In this rarefied air the uncritical ear
is unable to rumble the avalanche;
the snow-blinded eye
doesn't see what may lie
underfoot or over the precipice.
As we hurtle in sight of the tipping point
and slalom ephemeral effigies,
reconsider that shit
and the size of those prints -
that's a polar bear seeking new premises.
Ray Miller
Tue 13th Sep 2011 19:55
Thanks, Isobel.I don't know how I think them up. If I did I might stop. It's kind of automatic....but you still have to be there.