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9/11

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who could have known it?

terrorists taking no stock

would trade in futures

 

who could have known it?

those towers were autumns bridge

tears coming to fall

 

 

 

 

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T          T                                                                                      F                               

I           I                                                                                          A    

E          E                                                                                            L      

R          R                                                                                            L     

                                                                                                    

 

                                                                                                        

Note; I left this till now given the issue and timing.

I am not religious, but a lot of people are, especially in America- for which this image seemed a poignant human marker.

haikus9/11 terrorismautumn

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Jon

Sat 5th Nov 2011 12:53

Hi Chris
Surprisingly moving,given the length,and clever use of words for your ending.Great to speak to you at last Tudor.See you Thursday if you're there?

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Chris Co

Thu 6th Oct 2011 23:48

Thx for the comments and for reading

My Best

Chris

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Isobel

Wed 5th Oct 2011 19:01

Clever play on words and poignant. I think brevity works well in poems of this nature. x

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Jeff Dawson

Wed 5th Oct 2011 18:24

Nice one Chris, very respectful and poignant, Jeff

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Wed 5th Oct 2011 17:20


Works really well Chris..like the word links you use and it must have taken ages to do the last bit for I know when I did mine (brown crickets) it took forever lol..

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