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A Poem for Bernard

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Who has the occult knack of materialising

When we need him most; like a wizard,

A pirate, or the fairy king in a pantomime.

 

Grinning, and with that twinkle in his eye,

He appears in doorways, denying his years,

laden with jars of pickles, home-made;

Tomatoes, rhubarb, pippins from his trees, in carriers, and

Balancing an improbable Geranium, in a pot.

 

Deus ex machina; before you even know it,

He has fixed the fire, patted the dog,

And fetches in the post

From off the mat, telling you tales of forges,

Mills and ships, illegal stills,

Fires and explosions on some Scottish beach.

 

Yes, we all need someone like that,

Who will come galloping over the pass

To cheer your dismal heart

With simple solutions

When the wheels have fallen off

Your fancy bandwagon.

 

Or pulling up outside in his Mercedes; thank God

He didn’t scare the neighbours shitless

By coming in that armoured car

He keeps in his old barn at home,

As he once threatened.

 

He, who has that gift, given previously

Only to super-heroes with xray vision

And symbols on their vests, of knowing when

He’s needed; cheeks as rubicund as apples,

Eyes merry and dancing.

 

Settling on the sofa, he puts down his sticks,

Fixes you with a look, and utters a brisk

“Now then”, stroking the cat:

The only symbols on his vest

Are the washing instructions, but nonetheless

Order is restored, the kettle sings.

◄ Shutting-In Time

Sunday Girl ►

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Steve Rudd

Sat 8th Oct 2011 12:39

Hello, thanks for your comments.

Bernard actually exists, I met him when he was in the next bed to me in hospital and we kept in touch. He's a great character, 89 and still going strong, and he does have the knack of turning up just when he's needed - as he did the other day when I had been banging my head against the wall, spending time phoning up people who didn't care much if I lived or died.

And he does have an armoured car in his barn on the farm where he lives, it's a Ferret Scout Car that he's restoring. He also found a load of explosives when diving on a wreck off Mull and they tried setting it off on the beach to see if it would still ignite!

Disappointingly - from his point of view - it didn't, so they put it in an oil drum, under water, which apparently stabilises it, and he took it home. When he moved house, he thinks he forgot to take it with him to the farm, so if you hear a big bang from West Yorkshire, it means that the new owners have found it...

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Ann Foxglove

Fri 7th Oct 2011 18:13

A lovely description of somebody who I wish would visit my life occasionally! I do love poems with specific people/places/events. More personal and interesting.

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Ray Miller

Fri 7th Oct 2011 12:56

Nice poem, good rhythm, which is difficult in something fairly long. I know not why "pickles, home-made" rather than home-made pickles.Is it over the pass? Not "around the pass"?

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