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Souls

Souls

 

If I had ever breached your bridge of clothes

 

I might suppose that souls truly exist

and eternity’s on the other side

where 24/7 evangelists

pour praise into prose I’d die to avoid.

 

Suppose them sitting in homes and cities

of some virtual visionary fashion.

Would their ghostly, gaseous entities

perforate the balloon for a passion?

 

Suppose that those souls could access peep-holes

and observe you disrobe and unfasten

black stockings and skirt, your red camisole,

ectoplasm would ache for orgasm

 

and ignoring warnings, sign the waivers,

drink up the potions and shuffle the dice;

flutter and beat in their fruitless labours,

entering the trap with wide open eyes.

 

It’s just as well that you kept your legs closed.

 

◄ Courtship

Summat and Nuffin ►

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Ray Miller

Tue 18th Oct 2011 20:51

Well, it's a rubbish poem (though I like the peep-holes verse) but there's a nice idea in there- that our world's populated by those who choose to leave the bodiless and boring world of eternity for an uncertain life and certain death.In short, Isobel, I'm crackers!

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Tue 18th Oct 2011 16:27


I too have read this a few times and what Isobel said...Eyes wide shut comes to mind.. :) x

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Isobel

Tue 18th Oct 2011 13:31

I've read this a few times Ray and each time I don't quite know what to make of it. It's a really unusual piece. I've decided you must be having a laugh at people who believe in a conventional heaven. But would those evangelists have been better off if she had kept her legs open? That is the question to ponder...

You have an unusual mind to think something like this up :) x

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