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Aspidistra

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 (inspired to post by Harry's excellent blog "Bon Voyage")

 

We got this aspidistra

on our wedding day

I don’t recall who gave it

– much to my dismay;

Which makes it 30 this year,

 while you are 22

I’ve split it many times since then,

 as soon we’ll split from you;

As you start your second life

 –new home, new man, new job;

So I’ve split off two shoots for you

 – one “Sarah”, one called “Rob”.

◄ Golf Clubs

Everybody's Gone Serfin' ►

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Harry O'Neill

Fri 18th Nov 2011 19:09

John

That`s what comes of having a poet as a dad.

(I can just imagine you reading it to them)

Thanks for the mention.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 18th Nov 2011 15:43

Sentiment with a warmth of affection that is hard to resist. Nice one, J.C.

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Laura Taylor

Fri 18th Nov 2011 09:26

Sorry to do another Awwww, but Awwwww! :D

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Elaine Booth

Fri 18th Nov 2011 00:16

Aww, this is so lovely John. I like how poems can be like diaries, recording all kinds of events in our lives.

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John Coopey

Thu 17th Nov 2011 23:26

I wrote this last year on the occasion of my daughter leaving us to set home with her boyfriend.

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