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Seizing the Moment!

 

Twice this morning I ran up the stairs,

You may wonder why I would.

Well, after a year of aches and pains,

I did it because I could!

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 11th Dec 2011 20:29

A few lines that encapsulate so well human
delight in triumphing over frailties of flesh and bone.
I thought at once of my sister who is due a second knee replacement op. early in 2012.
I think she'd understand exactly what is meant!

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Lynn Dye

Sun 11th Dec 2011 18:45

Thank you Francine and Banksy :-)

Stefan, not a good idea in a bungalow! Lol. ;)

Thanks for comments, Stella and Cynthia.

John, I think the second run up was because I'd forgotten what I went up for on the first! ;)

Oops! Thank you for correction, Tommy - can't think why I didn't notice that! :-)

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Tommy Carroll

Sun 11th Dec 2011 17:14

Hy Lynn, I have read the poem several times and revisited it again to day and now know why I was a tad confused: is it 'It' or is it 'I'? Tommy :o)

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 10th Dec 2011 21:22

YES!

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John Coopey

Sat 10th Dec 2011 20:48

... but did you remember what you went for when you got there?

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Sat 10th Dec 2011 16:11


Brought some good memories back here Lynn..a lovely little piece indeed!

<Deleted User> (6895)

Fri 9th Dec 2011 19:24

I made Tricia try this Lynn-
she went through the roof!
why?

cos we live in a bungalow-haha!

S&P.xx

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Fri 9th Dec 2011 16:35

may as well while you can - liked it Lynn :)

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Francine

Thu 8th Dec 2011 22:00

Such a great little piece of inspiration!

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