The Sea Creaks
Like the rigging on our boat
Clouds swirl
Like a Spanish dancer
More and more
Faster and faster
Seagulls glide to the Shore
Their wings nudged by the Wind
A sublime ending to our day
We stand here soaked by spray
Totally moved
Because the Sea Creaks
Very atmospheric - a beautiful feeling!
wow- Jean- 'the sea creaks' and 'their wings nudged by the wind'.
Loved the Spanish dancer. and indeed the whole neat thing. (Not an American neat that, rather a Yorkshire one) Escapes for a few seconds. Thankyou. Win x
<Deleted User> (6315)
Sat 10th Dec 2011 15:41
How lovely!..enjoyed this :o)
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jean lucy thompson
Tue 19th Feb 2013 16:10
Thanx everyone So kind :)