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tip it in

Tip it in


Watch my stupid grin widen
As I tip it in
Every sodden gin
Every alcohol thing justified
Every false moment intensified
By something that does not exist
You cannot pour happiness
From the spout of a brown ale mile
happiness does not reside in the alphabet of a glass bottle smile
No matter what they print inside
And even if
Your pint glass
Is married to the cardboard of a beer mat
I shall dispute the fact that
Happiness is far from here.
In fact
The veneer that holds the steer of the stag
Is the only real thing around.
I have not
Nor ever will
Claim to have found
Happiness
At the bottom of a bottle.







◄ I shall have to make do (with videotape)

clouds of happiness ►

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Jeff Dawson

Mon 29th Sep 2008 18:41

Neither have I Pete its a nightmare and its becoming an epidemic, great lines here and stark reality and fear -

Every sodden gin
Every alcohol thing justified
Every false moment intensified

brilliant couldn't have said it better, Jeff

<Deleted User> (5646)

Sun 28th Sep 2008 11:04

The veneer that holds the steer of the stag.
Love that line Pete.

I know quite a few people who live in the bottom of a bottle. Very sad sight.

Love Janet.xx

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clarissa mckone

Sun 28th Sep 2008 03:37

ah Pete,
Happy , what is it? where is it? it has to be balanced, it comes from within, its not always around. find the little things. thats what i do. loved the poem

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