The Unknown Child
Very moving, Dave. Thought provoking stuff!
On the technical side - thank heavens for some rhyme in your poems. Much free verse seems more like "prosetry" than poetry.
Thanks Lyn - I have just revised a few lines as I wasn't happy with the flow. I think it will be ok for recording now though... :0
Best wishes Dave
I really like this, Dave. Powerful stuff.
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Dave D Poet Rhumour
Sat 25th Feb 2012 23:33
Thanks Yvonne, glad you like it. :)
Rhyme? Well yes, I prefer it myself - it is more lyrical when we read it to people. I figure rather more than 99% of my poems have a rhyming scheme, albeit some 'bend' the funetics a bit, hehe.
Free verse and prose can be harder to distinguish between, but each must find their niche.
Best wishes, Dave