The Last Ferry
I still dream of the Solent’s bottle green,
of gentle sea splashing against the weed clad legs of the dark jetty.
Comes then a steal of wind carrying a kiss of the sea wetting your cheek,
as raucous rusted
ferry chains ring out over the darkening estuary.
Roosted high upon her boatyard perch
a gull watches quietly from beneath downy white wing
as night pulls silence over the Medina like a glittering blanket.
It was as though all the stars in heaven had fallen to earth in a rain of precious jewels.
River and sea set ablaze in a myriad of colour, flash dancing to the far shore whereupon they ascend safely back into heaven once more.
Gus Jonsson
Wed 22nd Feb 2012 15:46
Thank you so much to everyone for your meaningful critique and comments I am obliged.
I will be contacting you all individually to discuss the various issues you have highlighted and once again for reading my piece.
Gus