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Postcard Perfect

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Post Card Perfect

 

It was New Years Eve

when you dipped me.

 

 You leaned in for a kiss.

I should have known then that eventually you'd drop me.

 

And

 the snow fell all around

a sailor and a nurse.

 

After the war had ended,

she stopped bandaging his wounds,

he bellied up to a bar

&

the photographed just faded away.

 

Every night when the street lights come on,

 the snow falls just enough

to give everything a fresh coat of paint.

 

and the postcard you sent still sits in it’s frame.

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Barbi Touron

Thu 8th Mar 2012 04:06

Thanks I should a known better than to date a sailor, usually I stay away from military types, but this one was AWOL and well it fascinated me for a little while.

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Rachel Bond

Wed 7th Mar 2012 23:05

i love this photo. theres a million stories wrapped around it.

i like yours, bitter sweet x

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