The Disappearance of John J. Dyer
The Disappearance of John J. Dyer
(another try at this one)
Mr Dyer, in rainbow shorts, plump
and pink under a palm tree, smiles
as he pats Miss Burtenshaw’s rump,
golden grains of sand on the beach
flowing through his open fingers.
Soft over rooftops a lullaby’s heard
as Dyer dreams of the one-armed bandit
in the back bar of his favourite pub
that laughs out coins at his neat ledgers.
But a cold wind whistles up the street
ahead of the march of abacus men
who don’t see the scouring waters
sucked down road gullies to the sea
washing away the fag-ends of days;
don’t see the source of seed corn
ripening in the fields at five percent;
don’t see the shoes on childrens feet,
or fingers combing long blond hair,
twenty pound notes under a pillow
to get off the game that men must play.
In the early hours, as lung-mist rises
out the mouths of marsh-fat cattle,
Mr Dyer looks back at the small boy
in the mirror, pulls out a grey hair,
puts on a grey face for the faceless,
and in polished leather shoes walks out
past the privet he clipped last Sunday
before church and buttered crusty roll.
He can hear the auctioneer’s song
counting up the cows future,
counting down his working days.
The palmist in drag looks for silver
and figures don’t figure anymore
in flesh, just foreclosures.
As the town clock strikes five
a younger Mr Dyer locks the door
and turns away, in his briefcase
a plane ticket and panties
for pretty Miss Burtenshaw.
The Disappearance of John J. Dyer
Mr Dyer, in rainbow shorts, plump
and pink under a palm tree, smiles
as he pats Miss Burtenshaw’s rump,
golden grains of sand on the beach
flowing through his open fingers,
his banks ready-cash out of reach
of the head-office money men.
His poor parents had scrimped and saved
to give a posh school education
Then proud as a pig on his elevation
as head of the bank in Market Street
with a somber suit and mahogany desk.
His elders and betters bowed to his face,
with invites to dinner or days at the races.
To touch him up for a low-rate loan
meet at The George of an afternoon.
Tonic old boy, with a gin or two.
A spit and shake should sign the deal
from a country gentleman such as you.
Soft over rooftops hangs a lullaby of lsd
as Mr Dyer dreams of the one-armed
bandit in the back bar of The George
that laughs out coins at his neat ledgers.
But a cold wind whistles up the street
ahead of the march of abacus men
who don’t see the scouring water
sucked down road gullies to the sea
taking away the fag-ends of days,
don’t see the source of seed heads
ripening in the fields at five percent,
or fingers tangled in long blond hair
twenty pound notes under a mattress
to get off the games men must play.
In the early hours, as lung-mist rises
out the mouths of marsh-fat cattle,
Mr Dyer looks back at the small boy
in the mirror, pulls out a grey hair,
puts on a grey face for the faceless,
and in polished leather shoes walks out
past the privet he clipped last Sunday
after church and buttered crusty roll.
He can hear the auctioneer’s
song counting up the cows future;
counting down his working days.
The palmist in drag looks for silver.
Figures don’t figure anymore
in flesh, just foreclosures.
As the town clock strikes eleven
a younger Mr Dyer locks the door
and turns away, in his briefcase
a plane ticket and panties
for pretty Miss Burtenshaw.
This was written in memory of a bank manager who changed the course of my life forty year ago when he lent me every penny to buy my farm, with the only security a handshake. Those were the days when money was honest and worked for the people. One day he walked out with his secretary, last heard of in the Bahamas.
Ray Miller
Sun 25th Mar 2012 22:21
There's some nice stuff in this but I did find it a bit disjointed. You start off with something of a regular rhyme which eventually is abandoned entirely.I think the last 2 verses are best, actually, though "a lullaby of lsd" pulled me up sharp. D'you mean £sd? I think the poem would benefit if you scrapped the 2nd verse or at least whittled it down a lot.