Acid Attack
Acid Attack
Seventeen, he saunters into the gents,
traces of a mate’s joke on his lips.
The two skulking men leer over shoulders
to appraise the boy’s threat.
Croaking Alright
as if pacifying a pair of dangerous dogs,
he selects the furthest urinal.
But they see the fumbled flies,
smell his sweat
hear his tachycardia and
slide either side of him
to begin a vicious audit of his body.
Tearing himself from the paralysis of their venom words
he stumbles out the door,
stutters excuses to his pals of ‘feeling unwell’,
then sits in a lay- by sobbing.
Twenty years on , every looking glass shows him
a fairground mirror reflection.
So out with mates or on first dates,
a taunting tinnitus ‘ You are grotesque’.
Despite holding our own wasps’ nest pasts,
the therapy group stares, through mizzled eyes at
this man who could adorn an aftershave advert.
fiona sinclair
Wed 28th Mar 2012 20:37
Thank you for the responses. This incident occurred some years ago. It is unclear if the guys were gay though I suspect this sort of thing is not restricted to the gay community.
The long term result is quite real but arguably feminine . Body dysmorphia like anorexia does occur among blokes.
I wanted to show a young man 17 ish who sauntered without a care into the gents but in the short space of the incident is changed rapidly by the events ..which is what happened