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LOVE'S NOT A WORD I CARE ABOUT

How can love cover the distance?

How can love manage the space?

The memory's a miracle worker

But it doesn't make up for your face.

 

For a lifetime you lived close by me

I saw you most every day

And I thought that you'd always be there

But suddenly you went away

 

You can't put a price on the life we knew

But when you left that life was through

Ever since that day when you walked out

Love's not a word I care about

 

There's never been anything so precious

As the feeling I held in my heart

I would have spent every penny I earned

To keep us from drifting apart

 

No matter that I'm not a rich man

With you I could never be poor

I had all the riches that I'd ever need

Each time that you answered your door

 

You can't put a price on the love we had

But then you left and life went bad

Ever since that day when you walked out

Love's not a word I care about

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Comments

<Deleted User> (10147)

Sun 1st Apr 2012 09:03

whether it was a poem or song it was music to my ears...

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 31st Mar 2012 10:58

Poem...song..."lyric" poetry (:->)? Take your choice...as long as you take something from it.

<Deleted User> (10123)

Sat 31st Mar 2012 10:36

Well MC, a little corny perhaps, is it simple? definitely - The problem is, we all look for more from your Wordliness. This is pleasant but not exciting. Can't please everyone, Oops, I hope I've not gone too far. If love's not a word you care about, why have you penned about love lost? Get out of that!!! Ta muchly, Nick.

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Lynn Dye

Fri 30th Mar 2012 22:59

Great poem, or song, MC, enjoyed.

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Fri 30th Mar 2012 22:57

Great dedication to love. Beautiful poem! And...it really sounds like a song.

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Yvonne Brunton

Fri 30th Mar 2012 21:02

Is this a song?
There's a great deal of pathos in the last line of the 'chorus'. This grows on you (on me).

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