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My Dad

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My Dad is a broken man

He’s 86 years old;

His days are spent self-pitying

Pathetic to behold;

He lost my Mam 5 years ago

And she was solid gold.

 

My Dad he was an iron man

In body and in mind;

A father more belligerent

It would be hard to find;

The corporeal embodiment

“Tenacity” defined.

 

I well recall from days of youth

The fights embarked upon

The Council, then the School Boards

He happily took on;

No cross for him to hard to bear

No cause a Rubicon.

 

The sinews on his forearms

Danced like steel bands

He pushed a tyre once off its rim

(This memory still stands)

Not using my tyre levers

But with his own bare hands.

 

Now when I see this broken fool

And curse the silly sod

I need to see the better man –

His back straight as a rod,

The man who was to me for years

Virtually a God.

◄ There's Allus a Dribble That's Left

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 6th Apr 2012 15:52

Another fine contribution from this source.
Touching, angry and profoundly moving...as anyone of a "certain age" will acknowledge,
it is welcome for the truth of the irresistible
transition from "lent-on" to "leaning-on" that great age can inflict on us all and the
humanity in this recognition and telling of it.

<Deleted User> (10123)

Fri 6th Apr 2012 11:19

In hindsight good memories linger the best. A wonderful jerker if I ever read one. Ta most Sincerely, NIck.

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Yvonne Brunton

Fri 6th Apr 2012 00:14

It's what we wll dread isn't it, John - seeing our parents metamorphose into needy children, reversing the roles on us? The fond memories we have are tainted by an unbidden revulsion we struggle to conceal.
My dad could remove and replace bike tyres with his hands too (ps verse 3 line 5 should it read 'too hard'?
I enjoyed reading this . It awakened some treasured and bitter memories.

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