What is love?
Fills the emptiness
Breaks the wave
Turns the head
Twists the fate
Destroys the expected
Shapes the form
Spoils the beauty
A silent call
Rouses the sleeping
Leadens the heart
Haunts my spirit
When we are apart
© Katy Hughes 2012
No, they're not.
This is a good 'list' poem. IMO, it generally supports both points of view, except for 'spoils the beauty' and 'leadens the heart'. Only those two lines steer the reader into 'tragedy'; all the others could be inferred either way, according to inclination.
<Deleted User> (10269)
Sun 29th Apr 2012 16:19
Neat simple and sad . . . Shouldnt love be a celebration rather than an addiction though . . . Jus a thought for ya ?
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Glyn Pope
Mon 14th May 2012 20:40
I love this one as well.