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7000th comment wins

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7000th comment-

make me a comment-

and

like eggs and flour

with precision

and

you will

be baked a cake by me

honest

 

 

7000th comment wins

by Tommy Carroll I don't understand

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7000th comment-
make me a comment-
and
like eggs and flour
with precision
and
you will
be baked a cake by me
honest

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what is this for?                                                                                                              Monday 28th May 2012 12:14 am

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Also by Tommy Carroll:

You do not hear my voice. | The Gaoler's daughter | A Lady's dismissal On stolen sheets |

 

where is the point?

 

 

Saffron and orange and lemon suffused with walnut oil- cost me a weeks wage will be dribbled over the baked ham or ginger sponge of your choice.

◄ You do not hear my voice.

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Laura Taylor

Wed 30th May 2012 15:59

Tommy - I love the experimental form of this!! Fab!

(gonna keep checking your counter now hehe)

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Tue 29th May 2012 09:14

And I shall lick the plate! Honest!

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Yvonne Brunton

Mon 28th May 2012 23:23

I'm a tad too busy to wait for the 6999th comment so as to add mine at the opportune moment to receive the cake of a lifetime. I will just have to make do with the crumbs from your poetic table. xx

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