Arthur ap Uther - The Battle of Lugg Vale
(Enormous nod to Bernard Cornwell's "The Winter King" - a master of storytelling)
As Briton fights Briton the Saxon awaits
And readies himself at Lloegyr’s gates,
Gorfyddyd of Powys consults with the Fates,
Siluria’s Gundleus too.
Outnumbered we hurried round hill and through dale
And came to this place where we’d die called Lugg Vale;
Our certainty spread like a plague that we’d fail
As fear and despondency grew.
We prayed to the Old Gods of Mithras and Bel
Some spat and touched iron, ill-luck to dispel;
The Christians prayed for deliverance from Hell;
Their priests rode behind in a waggon.
We all felt our battle-plan ill-thought and flawed
We mustered but 500 spearmen and sword
And none knew that self-doubt was wracking our Lord,
Arthur, ap Uther Pendragon.
Dumnonia’s poets would later ascribe
To Gorfyddyd paying the Saxon a bribe,
And centuries later the tales would describe
Lord Arthur as Champion of Right;
But we who would live through the slaughter that day
And saw the cruel fury with which he would slay,
Could never take oath on our weapons and say
Lord Arthur – A Chivalrous Knight.
The victory won and Gorfyddyd slain
And Gundleus given to Nimue again
Who peeled off his skin and, to cries of his pain,
Danced and gave thanks to the Fates.
And Arthur ap Uther, no longer Wild Beast,
Outwardly smiled at the victory feast
But inwardly thought of the foe to the East,
The Saxon at Lloegyr’s gates.
Harry O'Neill
Thu 14th Jun 2012 16:52
John,
Thinking of MC`s point about familiarity.
I think it works more effectively as it is.
These names about our savage past are rooted in our ancestral blood. The fact that they are unfamiliar (or rather half familiar) helps the poem.