Life's Towpath
Thanks Lynn, glad you like it :) Best wishes, Dave
Very enjoyable, Dave, some great lines.
Hi Winston - yes I certainly did need a prod, I have had few moments of inspiration recently, so thanks again for stirring me into action. :) Best wishes, Dave.
Thanks you very much Pat & Stef, you are as ever very kind to me. :) Best wishes, Dave
Glad I proded :-)
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Wed 1st Aug 2012 21:58
Your best so far Dave-clever lad.xx
Thanks Hugh, you are very kind, glad you enjoyed it. Best wishes, Dave
A fabulous flow of choice words and expressions all through this blueprint.It possess the quality which allows us to enjoy reading it time and time again.
"diamond days,"----"the gravel we crunch under our feet,adds percussion to our song,"
Hello Isobel, yes there is something magical about water that brings out some thoughts and feelings - and perhaps helps with their flow too!
I wish you luck in finding your way to finishing the canal poem, I owe my effort to Winston for prodding me about his project, or it would not have been written.
All best wishes, Dave
Hi Greg - many thanks for your kind comments, great to have your feedback. :) Best wishes, Dave
I enjoyed this, Dave, thought it was tender and poignant. It grows on you with every re-read. A must for somewhere on the Rochdale canal trail, in my opinion. Well done.
This is a sad one Dave. I think any scene with water in it does make you reflective on life and its pathways. I feel like that looking at sea lines also. I'm 2/3 of the way through my canal poem - not sure I'll post it though - can't seem to get any flow with my poetry at the moment.
I can't speak for Winston but I'm assuming that they just want canal poems - and this fits the bill :)
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tony sheridan
Mon 1st Oct 2012 16:05
I like this poem a lot. Take care, Tony.