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Who brings the flame to signify

That peace now lights this land

On whose sure grip may we rely

Which body lends this hand

 

Upon whose face the gentle glow

To light the way for all

A worthy grasp of all that comes

With populace in thrall

 

The backers, hip to all things good

Whose strength may awe the meek

Are striding through our neighbourhood

The streets we knew, now chic

 

With none to cross the undrawn line

All smiles upon each mug

And those with work they must resign

At home beneath the rug

 

So spread glad tidings, far and wide

The days are passing fast

We're queueing up to catch this ride

To gawk as it goes past

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Tommy Carroll

Tue 7th Aug 2012 13:57

School playing fields: 21 sell-offs have been approved by coalition
• Michael Gove agreed sales despite pledge to protect pitches
• Pressure builds on coalition to rethink sports strategy

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Ray Miller

Wed 1st Aug 2012 17:38

Hello Katherine.Shame about the non-rhyme of glow/ comes.How about glow/flows?
With none to cross the undrawn line - maybe "Though none can cross...." Is anyone smiling about it, though? I assume you mean the special olympic lanes.
Seems a bit arbitrary to include 3 commas and omit question marks.It's sad, I know, but I notice these things.
Enjoyed the poem and the dedicated follower of fashion poem.

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Katherine Shirley

Wed 1st Aug 2012 12:26

Thank you Andy!

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Andy N

Wed 1st Aug 2012 01:19

excellent stuff - logged specially in to say how i enjoyed this.. although really enjoyed all of it - the first two stanzas are my favourite x

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