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Abandonment

 

Floating in pools of expectation,

feeling your excitement,

hearing your voice,

low and melodious, gently teasing,

unfastening one button at a time,

and all the while, your liquid eyes

butterflies-inducing that mesmerise.

I shiver, quiver in readiness

as anticipation eats me up,

we kiss and tremble in each other’s arms.

Soon there will be nothing left to hide,

my emotions laid as bare

as newly exposed flesh

but deep down I always knew

that with you it would have to be

the sweetest surrender of all. 

◄ While I Was Writing Something Else...

Downtrodden Youth ►

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Lynn Dye

Sat 18th Aug 2012 10:15

Thank you, Stef, you are very kind. Either way, hehee. xx

<Deleted User> (6895)

Sat 18th Aug 2012 09:30

Delivered,albeit late-
one big dongering donger.

Would you like it in yer 'and,or
shall I shove it in yer letter box?

:O).xx

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Lynn Dye

Mon 13th Aug 2012 23:38

Thank you everyone. :o)

Isobel, glad you said that, I wasn't sure about rhyming in a free verse!

Hugh, well hopefully, lol. Cheers.

John, at least I never mentioned thrashing!!!

Harry, your comment made me laugh.

Appreciate all your comments.

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Harry O'Neill

Mon 13th Aug 2012 21:50


Sexy - woman - sexy

Stop it!

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John Coopey

Mon 13th Aug 2012 15:01

Naughty, naughty!

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Hugh

Sun 12th Aug 2012 09:46

Excellent,you'll have us all sizzling in pools of excitement reading this.Beautifully written

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Isobel

Sun 12th Aug 2012 09:41

Oh you little devil Lynn :)

I like your use of internal rhyme in this. x

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