New Library at Pontefract
New Library at Pontefract
(on seeing a film featuring John Betjeman)
Long, long ago, when I was twelve,
John Betjeman was here
to make romance for Pontefract,
to make it very clear
that this was not some ‘northern town’
of legend, cold and drear,
but hill-top place, Italianate -
the self-same atmosphere
that brought the olive growers in
to market year by year.
For olives, please read liquorice -
and no, you mustn’t sneer,
‘For townscape qualities like this
are (please believe me dear)
designed to raise the soul of man
to bring us all good cheer.
Town planners now, it seems to me
lose sight of this idea.
Their modern blocks are hideous,
depressing, and austere.’
In Ponte now, I tread your steps,
departed balladeer,
where no one much remembers that
John Betjeman was here.
Still stands the library you loved -
it’s Nouveau lines all clear -
but library no more, alas -
good God! - your eyes would blear -
they’ve built a new one opposite -
egg-boxy - concrete - queer…
Ray Miller
Wed 3rd Oct 2012 23:54
Good answer. I certainly agree about the archaism and Betjeman, but it does kind of stick out a bit, being the sole occurrence.I'd be inclined to move library in the later line, which itself would probably cause some domino effect so you're best as you are.