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Backward

They reckon at 7 you’re too old

for adoption. I look down on your head

that’s too tiny to fit in a swimming cap

or a bicycle helmet and trails behind

your peers by 4 years in reading and writing ;

at your inside out and backward dress

bespattered with pie and think on all

of the words you forget from one line

to the next; the daily reports of doors slammed

shut and fingers bit, the roars and kicks

of 2 year old tantrums that last for ever and say

surely that must count for something?

 

 

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winston plowes

Thu 8th Nov 2012 16:00

Lovely this Sid. great imagery. Win

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Ray Miller

Wed 24th Oct 2012 18:37

Oh, thank you, Isobel. Do you put your dresses on back to front and inside out, too?

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Isobel

Wed 24th Oct 2012 18:03

Very moving. I like this poem, but then I would, wouldn't I?

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