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Hidden Agendas

My husband’s lover is jealous of me
My husband is jealous of you
I am jealous of your wife
And she doesn’t have a clue

 

Honesty has no part to play
In this age old fashioned game
All delightfully free in delusion
The blood still runs the same

 

Katypoetess 2013

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Nigel Astell

Tue 6th Nov 2012 15:04

His wife
Is free
But the
Jealous triangle
Must keep
Hot blooded
To make
It work.

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Anthony Emmerson

Mon 5th Nov 2012 02:16

"Oh what a tangled web we weave,
When first we practise to deceive!"

Sir walter Scott - "Marmion."

"The blood still runs the same."

Great conclusion Katy; love and hormones have a lot to answer for! :)

Regards,
A.E. :)

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Isobel

Sun 4th Nov 2012 19:16

ps I like it cos it's quirky.

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Isobel

Sun 4th Nov 2012 19:15

It sounds like you have a complicated life - it took me some time to work out the first verse :)

If you chopped the odd syllable, particularly in the second verse, it could skip along like a child's rhyme.

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