thin ice
thin ice
Out there you never felt the whistling cold,
the scalpel probe of blue steel, seeking out
your crimson core. Scribing arcs across the
ice, arabesque and pirouette, sharp turns
where crystals flew like frozen sparks. Your
skates left traces, silvered tracks; we knew
the cracks, like sonar bleeps, would never
catch you. Oblivious, you’d spin; a snowflake
dancing, a winter moth, a transient comet
through our years. The day you disappeared
we found the jagged patch of blackness, and
a hole
in the still air.
David Blake
Wed 6th Feb 2013 19:01
I like this a lot. Very intense-feeling, almost as if the words themselves are skating on ice and are careful not to slip.