Burdens
Thanks Darren.
I enjoyed this. Nicely paced and understated. Very evocative - got the imagination going.
darren thomas
Mon 7th Jan 2013 15:15
I enjoyed reading this. The contrast between the opening and (toward) the poem's conclusion compelled me to read it again. And again. 'cars steam along the wet road' evokes a great image too.
Cheers Steve. No, not a fancy form, not that I know of anyway.
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Neil Fawcett
Mon 7th Jan 2013 17:56
cheers dave.