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Paxos

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The wind in the olive trees
Is making a terrible noise
I can barely hear
The locust crouching in the dark,
Playing like the blind fiddler
On the evening metro

Across a sinking country
Nobility finds form.
The smoke of a green candle
Rises into darkness,
An economy slides into dust,
The world is old but was always old.

A stick insect walks the length
Of an illuminated pool,
It's awkward arms in rotation
Like early machinery.

He pauses to listen to the wind
Then resumes his work.

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Lynn Dye

Sat 12th Jan 2013 17:00

Good one, Tom. Enjoyed this.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 12th Jan 2013 16:48

I like the immediacy, the 'world in a grain of sand' concept. Great imagery pulling in all kinds of related ideas. Is the 'He' the 'stick insect' which furthers that metaphor and impact? Or did 'I' become 'He', perhaps unintentionally. Genuinely interested.

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Isobel

Thu 10th Jan 2013 15:13

Lovely stuff Tom. I can see it all so vividly and though this is obviously a modern take on the place, I love the way you set it all in context - the timelessness to it all.

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Fkx

Wed 9th Jan 2013 23:04

Magnificent and very "in the moment." It is as if we were all there simultaneously experiences it.

tony sheridan

Wed 9th Jan 2013 19:20

Love this! The last two lines are spot on! Take care, Tony.

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