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Horse

 

What heavy breath escapes you;

matted creature, snorting monster–

four legged man without woman

as master;

your beard twists of licked

charcoal curls; dark- rubbed

with the rolling clouds behind.

I hear the sounds of a wet chest

strained upon the muscle

of your front legs;

an intelligent mind, outside the materials

of a humankind;

free running thistle thick through,

calves are strong as steel ship sterns,

you - the colour of rain,

struck fast with blades of light.

If I could pierce that needle point

of the moon fixed in your eye,

or chocolate fold my hair

through your mane, moor wild,

could I come with you into the night?

Embed the turf ink bleeds of grass

underneath my fingernails

and at last, at last

know the speed with which the wind

moves, the trees grow; canticle

orbs where the earth is shaded?

I have your tawny heart,

your running thought, your secret

smile kiss of amber bark;

my eyes through the falling snow,

the dying clods of clay

you escape.

 

 

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Isobel

Fri 22nd Mar 2013 19:17

Beautiful - just beautiful. I love the same lines Jonboy chose - they are so startlingly original.

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Jon

Fri 22nd Mar 2013 18:36

Amazing piece Marianne-lots of depth and delicious description;'If I could pierce that needle point of the moon fixed in your eye,or chocolate fold my hair,through your mane,moor wild,could I come iwth you,into the night?'
Stunning.

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Rachel Bond

Fri 22nd Mar 2013 18:28

horses and chocolate :)

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 22nd Mar 2013 15:51

Glorious - just plain glorious. Made my pulse race. I'm with Rachel. What do men see in horses, I wonder. Maybe - wishful thinking?

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Marianne Louise Daniels

Fri 22nd Mar 2013 11:08

hee hee cats too Rachel! x

Thank you for reading x

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Rachel Bond

Thu 21st Mar 2013 23:56

'chocolate fold my hair through your mane' what about us girls and horses eh? :)

<Deleted User> (6895)

Thu 21st Mar 2013 21:30

blown away-with the greatest of PLEASURE!!xx

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