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Synaesthetic Symphony

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Synaesthetic symphony

plays out behind the drapes      

as a figure becomes realised;

each line and tone to form, compose,

a mirroring in real eyes,

a lesson in anatomy

Energies of form release to

represent a vertebrae

Fit chin to floor, rib to eye

Geometric nipple

planes to ankle

by degrees

Pelvic make up, breast and buttock,

brushed in oil,

scratched with ink,

pencilled in,

untouched by tongue or fingertip

This water-coloured undulation,

sabled imitation of cool translucent skin,

is caught on canvas, every freckle,

wrinkle, dip and nook

Here primitive, there pointillist;

a cubist took the curves to task,

carved angles out of rounds

Pastels captured shadows and the sunlight rainbow hue

of a body within bodies,

ringed within the sketching room

 

 

 

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tony sheridan

Mon 25th Mar 2013 11:37

I've read this a few times. Well put together. Well done Laura.

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Laura Taylor

Mon 25th Mar 2013 10:50

Thanks Harry

The pointillism is just another technique is all and I kind of liked how it contrasted with cubist.

It's not a painting btw, the pic was done in pastels :)

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Harry O'Neill

Sat 23rd Mar 2013 14:08


Laura,
nice `art commenting on art` piece.

Unusual for yours I was able to follow it all the way through

I like `a cubist took the curves to task` Got the translucency in the sabled brush marks, but don`t think the pointillism works (it spoils it a bit)


Very good poem...(and painting (save for the colours)

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Laura Taylor

Fri 22nd Mar 2013 10:50

Hehe Cynthia :D Aye, I get a wee bit carried away with it meself ;)And I'd agree with you, for sure.

Of course, we also have to add in the 'I' to the 'eye' to the 'real eye/s', just to put yet another spin on it! This is the kind of thing that I think about whilst lying down and doing 'nothing' (one of my most treasured 'activities'). And it's why I'm never, ever, bored :D

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 21st Mar 2013 17:14

The mystery of 'eye' is as old as humanity. All mythology and ancient wisdoms focus on its 'meaning': what is 'real' as perceived by the physical 'eye', and 'realized' by the 'inner eye' of understanding/realization. It's a marvel to consider, as deeply as you can go in your own thinking, to feel the searching power of other kinship minds. An unparalleled journey. IMO, almost every major idea boils right back to this main conceptual conundrum.

Yeah, yeah - I'm done. I get carried away.

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Laura Taylor

Thu 21st Mar 2013 13:49

Many thanks Cynthia and Dave

I've been fascinated with the 'art imitating life' idea behind life modelling/all art tbh, and have been putting together lines for this for a while now. I love how it's all just representation, but that the representation itself is a real thing. We use real things/tools to recreate the tool we use for art. How one perspective is completely different from another, but that everything feeds into everything else.

I've also been looking for a place to juxtapose 'realise' with 'real eyes' for bloody ages too now, since I had a little epiphany about them one late night, soaked in smoke and merlot ;D So am made up about that ha :D

When you 'realise' - you see with 'real eyes'.
Very simple, but quite wow, to me, anyway!

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Dave Bradley

Wed 20th Mar 2013 17:59

I like this. Particularly liked the thought that there is an energy in form which is just waiting to be released.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 20th Mar 2013 17:26

You sure are good with words - to express your challenging ideas,and fulfilling them with electric images. There are superb lines here, and you know them.

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