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In The Frame

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In The Frame

 

We met in an antique shop,

while you were sifting through

dusty memories

and tarnished gilt.

I was new and bright -

just what you needed in your life

at that time of regrets

and heartaches.

 

So we went home together

and you placed me on a pedestal.

The centre of a universe

that orbited your soul.

I put my arms

around your family -

and when the children came,

I held them close.

 

Holidays.

Weddings.

Births.

Parties.

Each passing moment

safely stored

behind my

window gaze.

 

Until the dust

finally settled

on your life

and you sought

the comforts

of a digital

lover.

 

Now I sit,

unwanted,

where we met

and think of all

the memories

we shared

before you

strayed.

 

a day in the life of compin the frame

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BRIAN EVANS

Tue 2nd Apr 2013 15:45

LOVE IT IAN WELL WRITTEN B

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Isobel

Sun 31st Mar 2013 10:47

Out with the old and in with the new - love it!

It would never be chucked out if it were mine - I find moving screens distracting in a lounge area - I prefer the traditional fixed photo fame.

I must admit to never having taken piccies at funeral though ;

A very enjoyable read.

JC - it's not over till the fat lady sings - I haven't seen a list of poems for judging on yet...

<Deleted User> (6315)

Sat 30th Mar 2013 13:36

Oh wow..you have out-done me..clever, clever idea and it works so well.. :)

<Deleted User> (6895)

Sat 30th Mar 2013 12:55

Excellento!Bravo!xx

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John Coopey

Fri 29th Mar 2013 23:11

I agree. Excellent idea and delivery.
Is it too late for you to submit it for the inanimate objects comp?

<Deleted User> (9882)

Fri 29th Mar 2013 17:10

oh you clever Mr. Whiteley!x

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Yvonne Brunton

Fri 29th Mar 2013 12:54

What a lovely idea so well expressed. I love it.

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