Cromer
the sea is rattling bones today
and the wind holds my ears to ransom
for want of a scarf and a hat
she is walking on the promenade
and wants no part of the play
so I am talking to the man on the pier
with the rods and ask
“what’s your game?“
whiting
and if he’s lucky
bass
darren thomas
Thu 4th Apr 2013 12:38
'The sea is rattling bones today'.
A great hook. Full rhymes. Assonance. And more going on behind the scene.
Nice one.
dt