Wandering expositions
Wandering expositions
Poetry has many inspections
each line remains re-touched;
we frown at fingered collections
of nouns and other stuff.
There are troublesome inflections,
and bleeding, wrung-out verbs-
the wandering expositions
of rhymes the metre serves.
There are stand alone conjunctions
in hope that it amazes
where
in solitude it functions
in contrived schematic phrases.
Harry O'Neill
Fri 19th Apr 2013 11:56
Tommy,
Why don`t you fix line eleven, stick another two lines on to it and make it a `with it` kind of sonnet?
It`s good.